We got creative with our writing this term and wanted to publish our reviews for the circus and write a blog post so I’ll just hand straight over to our very professional reviewers…

The old brown benches creaked underneath as they craned there necks to see the epic entrance of the colourful performer.The daring ringmaster bursted into the arena really fast!The sounds of lions roaring loudly filled the audience with excitement .The colourful confetti flew onto the ground while the epic fire breather breathed FIRE!!!I could smell the smell of popping popcorn at break and the fluffy sweet candy floss fizzed in my mouth!!!

By AB

The old wooden benches made a loud creak as the crawd sat down.Then someJuggiers came and did an amazing performance.The Ring master sang with a smile on his face.

By LE

The old benches creaked when the people were cheering at the beautiful dancers they welcomed them as they twirled onto the stage. When the colourful ringmaster slide onto the stage as people cheered at him and ariel dances danced like a princess.
The colossal wrinkly elephants looked beautiful but I could here them before I could see them.

By EC

The children cheered as loud as they can as the acrobats flew up into the air and people couldn’t believe there eyes.
The ringmaster slid smoothly onto the stage as the people cheered with happiness.
The lions jumped through the circle of fire while the acrobats swooped across the exited audience.

By DK

The ring master had a big fat chubby belly and he wore a pair of soft red and black trousers. He looked like a magician because he had a tall top hat and he wore white gloves. His crunchy voice was as loud as a stomping angry elephant.

By LHa

The old wooden benches when I sit on them they crike and I fieeyul like they ar gowing to snape.The audience gasped in a amazmunt when the the acrobats got lifted up in the air.

By RFT

The flaming fire sparking with ash. The audience cheering with excitement the children screening with laughter.
The wooden benches creaked when you sat down.The enormous elephants came loudly donw the middle of the performance. I could even smell them before I saw them.
The lions roared loudly while dripping with swet. The noise elephants made me wet because he squirted me with water out of his big long trunk.
I could not wait until the break because I could smell the candy floss, the toffee apples and the popcorn sweated was my favourite.

By LP

As the audience sat down on the old wooden benches they creaked like on a spooky night.The benches freaked me out so whilst the amazing show was on I tried not to move but still I had a really fun time.
The colourful ringmaster slid into the arena when the crowd giggled in enjoyment at General Tom Thumb who was looking proud on a baby elephant.
The amazing Trapeze artist flew beautifully in the air.I was amazed.I dreamt of twirling in the blue sky with the birds.

By LB

The Ringmaster ran in like a shooting bullet then closely behind the enourmous elephants came in. The sparkly acrobats shot up as fast as a cheetah they twirled around in circles by a very thin rope. Then the lions pounced through a circle of flames and then did the loudest roar you could ever imagine.Horses ran around in circles dressed like an angel. High in the air the acrobat was holding on with one hand on.
In the break we bought more popcorn when I put it in my mouth it melted like cold ice cream on a hot day. When we went back to the tent the lady sang with all her heart it was amazing I almost cried. Her voice was so beautiful I couldn’t look away.

By BWa

The big stripy circutent was filled with one thousand cheers from the satisfied audience.The beautiful wit horses trot gracefully across the open stage.The lion leaping through fire. The colossal wricly elapant stood on hind legs and the audience gasped in trance.Sudenly the ringmaster burst into the arena and tossed his hat into the air and started spinning like a tornado.

By LHo

THE lions grawled wildly like my belly when i am hungry.
The butery popcorn melting in my mouth like the sun on
A hot day.
The powerful trapize artists swung from one bar to another gracefully.

The enormously soft candy floss in my hand.
As the glamorous ring master scided in to the arena as wild as a tiger.
He was followed by the flipping acrobatics.
The audience gasped in a masement as lions jumped through the hoops.

The confetti shined as bright as a dimond.

By FMc

The old rusty chairs were cracking and shacking because there were that old . The colourful ringmaster burst into the arena while the rest of the people were sitting down. The astonishing elephants were following the wonderful ringmaster. The courageous acrobats were swinging on the ropes.
A baby elephant was running across the stage and General Tom Thumb holding a gun. and a sword.

By EB

The floors began to creak and shake and a dozy perfume hit my nose. Suddenly a herd of Elephants and a pack of Lions dramatically entered the red nad white circus tent the Lions through hoops of fire and the Elephants on two legs…. Then there he was the ringmaster he had descended through the roof!!! He was riding on a GIANT ring and his hat said prince of humbug! Oh! Who can forget the actors themselves some flipping on trapeze and some dancing gracefully in blurry shapes. Never before had I seen such talented people

Then the ringmaster passed his hat on till it came back to himself.He went away and a new one came on stage. I was entranced as I thought of these amazing ideas for the public. Then the trapeze arist came down next to hi and then they………………………………………….KISSED!!! {eeeeeewwwwwww eeeewwww eeewww} then they parted and he did knee slides and performers rotated in mid air!
“WOWS” filled the night air. Then guess what I saw …. you can’t well get ready tiny Tom Thumb riding a little elephant. Roards of laughter came out of my head nad I saw someone who probably should shave acting like a kid

Then a piece of paper confetti came on my nose and I vowed not to put it in the bin ever, ever, ever, ever and you get the idea right?!!
I craned my neck to see the ending.It was the best thing I had ever seen!!!!!!!!!

By MCl